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But You Told Me...
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But You Told Me…
It was a Friday night and the evening was so romantic
I was laying in your arms and had never felt so right
I felt weak at the touch of your lips on mine
I was craving you but knew I shouldn’t give in to myself
My heart and my head were disagreeing with one another
My heart told me nothing was wrong
The moment was as perfect as it could ever be
Neither of us could resist
My heart knew my love for you would keep on strong
My head told me it wasn’t right
The moment wasn’t how it is was supposed to be
Neither of us was properly prepared
My head knew nothing good would come from this
You made your move but I was feeling reluctant even still
This felt so right but in the most wrong way possible
I told you this wasn’t meant to happen this way
Yet you touched me in all the right places
And you said all the right words
It was then that you told me I was beautiful
That was when you told me we would be forever
It was then that you told me I was perfect
That was when you told me we would never part
Hesitant
But now convinced
The moment
You said
“If you love me too”
There was no way I could turn back now
I was fully yours and no one else’s
Caught up in the moment and completely unaware
You promised nothing bad would come of this
You lied and I understand now
You never knew me but you knew me well enough
To know my greatest weakness
“But you told me you loved me”
It was a Friday night and the evening was so romantic
I was laying in your arms and had never felt so right
I felt weak at the touch of your lips on mine
I was craving you but knew I shouldn’t give in to myself
My heart and my head were disagreeing with one another
My heart told me nothing was wrong
The moment was as perfect as it could ever be
Neither of us could resist
My heart knew my love for you would keep on strong
My head told me it wasn’t right
The moment wasn’t how it is was supposed to be
Neither of us was properly prepared
My head knew nothing good would come from this
You made your move but I was feeling reluctant even still
This felt so right but in the most wrong way possible
I told you this wasn’t meant to happen this way
Yet you touched me in all the right places
And you said all the right words
It was then that you told me I was beautiful
That was when you told me we would be forever
It was then that you told me I was perfect
That was when you told me we would never part
Hesitant
But now convinced
The moment
You said
“If you love me too”
There was no way I could turn back now
I was fully yours and no one else’s
Caught up in the moment and completely unaware
You promised nothing bad would come of this
You lied and I understand now
You never knew me but you knew me well enough
To know my greatest weakness
“But you told me you loved me”
im actually kind of proud of this one.. please comment
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When I read it, I know that was right from the heart. It's great, really great.